I'm glad you finished this , but, Wow...felt like you might have used some text from my video...be original and go for it. You have your own message to tell.
Slide show has great music that helps set the mood for the message you are about to share with the viewer.
Length of slideshow is too short – feels like you just were about to deliver your main idea, but then it stopped.
Not enough textual information -- add more facts and statistics. Need to tell others what can be done. In other words, finish the message you started.
Credits not present. Need to post these to give credit where credit is due for images, music and information.
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I'm glad you finished this , but, Wow...felt like you might have used some text from my video...be original and go for it. You have your own message to tell.
Slide show has great music that helps set the mood for the message you are about to share with the viewer.
Length of slideshow is too short – feels like you just were about to deliver your main idea, but then it stopped.
Not enough textual information -- add more facts and statistics. Need to tell others what can be done. In other words, finish the message you started.
Credits not present. Need to post these to give credit where credit is due for images, music and information.
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